Daffodils - Acrylic still life painting 'revisited'

Daffodils

12x12 (30.48 cm x 30.48 cm)
Acrylic on canvas, framed
$200

I liked my Daffodils painting (previous post) but some things did not convince me 100%. When I took it to my painting group's critic day, I received several good comments, and some constructive critiques that confirmed my iffy feelings and made me decide to rework it.

Is it better now? I'm not sure, but I hope so, because there is no way back. :)